An Idea for season 4

jpot27 · 02-20-2008, 10:27 PM

Sona Court Yard: The prison is orderly recovering from the near riot at the end of Season 3. T-bag is walking around making small pleasantries with the prisoners as Bellick follows near by as the apparent 2nd in command. The loud speaker announces: Sucre, You have a visitor. T-bag and Bellick look at each other,still unaware Fernando is in there. In the visitors cage Sucre comes out. not recognizing his visitor.
Sucre: Do I know you?
LJ: I'm Link's son, he sent me here to talk to you so no one would ask any questions. I came in under a fake name.
Sucre:Runs in the family... I'm happy everything worked out ok with you and the brothers. It's nice to finally meet you, little man.
LJ: I want to thank you for all the help you gave my uncle to get me free. Uncle Mike doesn't even know your in here. We haven't spoken to him since I got back with my dad.
Sucre: It was nothing, LJ. After what Michael did for me back in the states, I owed you guys big.
LJ: My dad told me to tell you, he's been sending a little extra money back to the states for your baby. I'm sorry I can't stay long I just wanted to thank you and pass on the message to you.
Sucre: Thank you LJ, and tell Link that means a lot to me. You guys be safe,I'm going to go get used to life in Sona now.
LJ: (Quietly as Sucre walks away) Don't get too used to it, you may be here shorter than you think.
(Sucre stops and turns around to see LJ walking away. As he enters the court yard Bellick and T-bag stand on opposite sides of the door and Bellick Grabs him.)
T-Bag: Well well well look what we have here. Sneaking around with out speaking to the gentlemen who run the place, Sucre? You need to learn the rules, boy.
Sucre: Lincoln had told me this place was Hell, but with you two in charge that was a serious understatement.
T-bag: Lincoln! That's a name I haven't heard in a while.
Sucre: What do you want?
Bellick: The same thing you want, Sucre. I want out of here. We already got screwed once on that.
T-bag: But this time we won't. We all know Michael Scofield doesn't leave someone he actually cares about behind.

Premise for S4: Michael hunts down Company (Gretchen, Whistler, and eventually Mahone (Kellerman/ wishful thinking,) while Lincoln, LJ, and Sofia try to break Sucre out of Sona without Bellick and T-bag who think all the breakout work is being done by Michael making life extremely danngerious for Sucre in Sona.

Let me know what you guys think.

ap_magic1 · 02-21-2008, 12:28 AM

i think wat u wrote is is fantastic!!! If we had people like you writing season 3 maybe it would have turned out better! Keep em comin!

smileyone · 02-21-2008, 03:21 AM

mmmmmmmnnn...... yep.....good one!!! LJ needs to be in it somehow... LOL!! I wonder what they will do with LJ now!!!

TbagMahone · 02-21-2008, 03:23 AM

theres gonna be a season 4?
I thought i heard season 3 was the last season

candyrose · 02-21-2008, 05:41 AM

Excellent Job--keep it up....

Egyptian · 02-21-2008, 07:11 AM

No, I disagree with you on that, Bellick won't be a number two, T-Bag won't probably even talk to him, at the end of Season 3 he was just sitting there (sadly I think) i.e. he wasn't with T-Bag, I'd rather think that they might even help Bellick I mean what has he done to be in Sona?

Boss · 02-22-2008, 06:31 AM

Goooooooooood

Uncle Teddy · 02-23-2008, 01:27 PM

Thats a good job. Can you write a whole episode for one of the episodes for next season.

jpot27 · 02-23-2008, 03:25 PM

I'll try to write the script scene by scene inbetween school papers and what not, happy you guys liked it, maybe the creators will see it and the forum will actually get some voice in the show lol. Working on the 2nd part now, give me a little while.

smileyone · 02-23-2008, 03:34 PM

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Originally Posted by jpot27

I'll try to write the script scene by scene inbetween school papers and what not, happy you guys liked it, maybe the creators will see it and the forum will actually get some voice in the show lol. Working on the 2nd part now, give me a little while.

Maybe... you can write in a scene or two about the lovely but very innocent Whistler .... maybe being NOT so innocent...... Believe me..... No one will ever see that one coming... that will take everyone so by surprise....

02-20-2008, 10:27 PM	#1
jpot27 Member Join Date: Oct 2007 Posts: 63	An Idea for season 4 Sona Court Yard: The prison is orderly recovering from the near riot at the end of Season 3. T-bag is walking around making small pleasantries with the prisoners as Bellick follows near by as the apparent 2nd in command. The loud speaker announces: Sucre, You have a visitor. T-bag and Bellick look at each other,still unaware Fernando is in there. In the visitors cage Sucre comes out. not recognizing his visitor. Sucre: Do I know you? LJ: I'm Link's son, he sent me here to talk to you so no one would ask any questions. I came in under a fake name. Sucre:Runs in the family... I'm happy everything worked out ok with you and the brothers. It's nice to finally meet you, little man. LJ: I want to thank you for all the help you gave my uncle to get me free. Uncle Mike doesn't even know your in here. We haven't spoken to him since I got back with my dad. Sucre: It was nothing, LJ. After what Michael did for me back in the states, I owed you guys big. LJ: My dad told me to tell you, he's been sending a little extra money back to the states for your baby. I'm sorry I can't stay long I just wanted to thank you and pass on the message to you. Sucre: Thank you LJ, and tell Link that means a lot to me. You guys be safe,I'm going to go get used to life in Sona now. LJ: (Quietly as Sucre walks away) Don't get too used to it, you may be here shorter than you think. (Sucre stops and turns around to see LJ walking away. As he enters the court yard Bellick and T-bag stand on opposite sides of the door and Bellick Grabs him.) T-Bag: Well well well look what we have here. Sneaking around with out speaking to the gentlemen who run the place, Sucre? You need to learn the rules, boy. Sucre: Lincoln had told me this place was Hell, but with you two in charge that was a serious understatement. T-bag: Lincoln! That's a name I haven't heard in a while. Sucre: What do you want? Bellick: The same thing you want, Sucre. I want out of here. We already got screwed once on that. T-bag: But this time we won't. We all know Michael Scofield doesn't leave someone he actually cares about behind. Premise for S4: Michael hunts down Company (Gretchen, Whistler, and eventually Mahone (Kellerman/ wishful thinking,) while Lincoln, LJ, and Sofia try to break Sucre out of Sona without Bellick and T-bag who think all the breakout work is being done by Michael making life extremely danngerious for Sucre in Sona. Let me know what you guys think.

02-21-2008, 03:21 AM	#3
smileyone Moderator Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Bristol, England Posts: 11,425	mmmmmmmnnn...... yep.....good one!!! LJ needs to be in it somehow... LOL!! I wonder what they will do with LJ now!!! __________________ MAY 14th-16th 2010, BIRMINGHAM, UK ASYLUM 4, HOUSES OF THE HOLY AND OCTOBER 30th - NOVEMBER 1st 2009, YORK, UK GHOSTFACERS - HELL HOUNDS CON RIP. MR. KIM MANNERS MANY THANKS FOR ALL x

02-22-2008, 06:31 AM	#7
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02-21-2008, 12:28 AM	#2
ap_magic1 Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2007 Posts: 113	i think wat u wrote is is fantastic!!! If we had people like you writing season 3 maybe it would have turned out better! Keep em comin!

02-21-2008, 03:23 AM	#4
TbagMahone Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2008 Posts: 3	theres gonna be a season 4? I thought i heard season 3 was the last season

02-21-2008, 05:41 AM	#5
candyrose Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2007 Posts: 5,706	Excellent Job--keep it up....

02-21-2008, 07:11 AM	#6
Egyptian Member Join Date: Feb 2008 Posts: 31	No, I disagree with you on that, Bellick won't be a number two, T-Bag won't probably even talk to him, at the end of Season 3 he was just sitting there (sadly I think) i.e. he wasn't with T-Bag, I'd rather think that they might even help Bellick I mean what has he done to be in Sona?

02-23-2008, 01:27 PM	#8
Uncle Teddy Member Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 54	Thats a good job. Can you write a whole episode for one of the episodes for next season.

02-23-2008, 03:25 PM	#9
jpot27 Member Join Date: Oct 2007 Posts: 63	I'll try to write the script scene by scene inbetween school papers and what not, happy you guys liked it, maybe the creators will see it and the forum will actually get some voice in the show lol. Working on the 2nd part now, give me a little while.