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| Senior Member ![]() Join Date: Oct 2007
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| Smiley: OMFG!!!!! You are a nut, a big...fat...crunchy nut....yummy! I swear...for weeks now...Candy has been trying to liven up the place...start some ****...bring old Smiley back....and when she finally leaves...well darn it...Smiley is in full force.....what did Candy ever do wrong?? Did she not talk about the Whistler too much....have you just been waiting with that little story of yours, looking for a place to insert it?? *laughs, then sobs...then laughs again...oh the confusion* Actually, it was pretty darn funny....you must have been really bored...LOL!!! You even added the bit about the pop tarts....and his visible signs of aging....that was really good....a good summation of everything that has been mentioned...tied it up well...lol....I think I am going to be laughing for the rest of the night....but I must ask what happened to the sibling love affair?? Jpot...yours was really good....I could see you put some thought into...kudos to you and keep it up....it's really nice to read.... |
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__________________ ![]() MAY 14th-16th 2010, BIRMINGHAM, UK ASYLUM 4, HOUSES OF THE HOLY AND OCTOBER 30th - NOVEMBER 1st 2009, YORK, UK GHOSTFACERS - HELL HOUNDS CON RIP. MR. KIM MANNERS MANY THANKS FOR ALL x | |||
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| Member Join Date: Oct 2007
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| Im really getting to writing this but iwant to sum up my ideas for what happens next season one episode so sorry if it appears rushed from now on> (Michael arrives at the same Bar Whistler and crew just left from minutes ago. He enters checking out the place with the patented Scofield stare. Nothing seems out of the ordinary. Theres a few people langwishing about but none Michael recognizes. He sits at the bar.) Bartender: What will it be? Michael: Umm.. Rum and Coke por favor. Bartender: Coming up. (He prepairs the drink as the door opens in the background. As the bartender puts the drink down someone comes next to Michael much like Whistler did Mahone at the end of S3.) Person: Make it 2. You have taste, Mr. Scofield. Michael: I should have known it was you. Would you be going by Paul now? Or maybe Owen. Something Else perhaps? Kellerman: Kellerman will suffice. Michael: So be it. What do you want? Kellerman: As I said, Michael, similar asperations. All you await back in the United States is a simple trial and clemantcy from the Illinois State Govornor, and yet here you are in a dive bar miles from anything people like us would call civilization. And here I am standing next to you when I dont even exist anymore. No ID no records, no home, no job, no money, but my training my skills my value is something they could never take from me as you too Michael. The thing with Mahone, brilliant. I wouldn't have trusted the man who killed my father but your truly are relentless in your persuits. The three of us working together will put an end to this. Michael: Im listening but im not quite sure if im interested in your services, Paul. I have other problems right now. Kellerman: You must be talking about your friend Papi Sucre. Michael: Nothing gets past you. kellerman: I would say the same but wouldnt it be easier having another person helping in one endeveour then for you to be spreading your time across two? Michael: And how do you fit into all this? Kellerman: The coridinates that Whistler used as a cover werent a complete lie, they do exist and he does have to meet someone to return to the location to retrieve information that could out the company. Michael: And where would this be happening. Kellerman: its not the where, but the who, Michael. And that is where I fit in. |
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| | #25 |
| Member Join Date: Oct 2007
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| (In Lecharo's former room which is now being turned into T-bag and Bellick's office, they sit with Sucre.) T-Bag: Ok Sucre now listen up, your taking us with you when Scofield comes back, theres no question about it or we will kill you and him if we can. While were waiting, you'll be treated as well as we are and be 3rd rank. You see myself and captain Bellick don't habla so well, we need you to run our preverbial public relations to keep things orderly. Sucre: Forget it, I'm not having anything to do with either of you. What was that crap about everyone being equally when I came in here. Bellick: Thats just what it was, Sucre. crap. Now are you in or not. T-bag: And let me tell you if you are not in it won't be your life flashing before your eyes, it'll be your ankles pretty boy. Sucre: What do you need me to do? T-bag: All you got to do is mingle with the locals and let us know whats going on. You'll get the same food we eat, a room up here in this level next to the ones we have and a few of the other percs we up here have. (Flashes a bottle of rum left over from the tunnel the prisoners didn't get to during the sacking of the room.) Sucre: Does that include a new set of clothes that I didn't bury someone in? Bellick: (Sarcasticly as he walks into the other room.) The Macy's is right this way. C'mon. |
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| | #26 |
| Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2008
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| Wow, I'm really into your storyline, I can picture it all happening. Keep it going. |
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| | #27 |
| Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: australia
Posts: 852
| i looove this!!!! keep going mate!! |
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