Peter/Nathan Gen fic

bobbinrob · 12-02-2007, 02:58 AM

I asked my friend Tori to prompt me...

she prompted me to write a story where Peter gets Hypothermia and Nathan is with him....
so I did my very best. I have not written Peter/Nathan before so let me know how I did
also this is unbeated so forgive my errors
and leave me a comment coz I still get scared of posting my stories

author: thats be me
charcters: Peter/Nathan
Gen/Pg fic
word count: 660
spoilers: not really any, based on s1 early
disclaimer: I sadly own neither Peter (

) nor Nathan nor Heroes

It had started snow, and became really cold . He hadn't intended to stay outside so long. Peter had been standing on the rooftop for hours. He wasn't sure sometimes if all of these things could possibly be real. Peter wondered why he had been chosen for these powers. What did the world expect him to do with them? He wished Nathan had understood why he had become confused and overwhelmed.

Peter's hands started to shake. He hadn't even noticed the drop in temperature at first. Peter raised his hand and looked at it, trying to make it stop. The shaking continued, and Peter stumbled forward. He didn't understand what was happening. Suddenly his whole started turning as white and blurry as the snow falling from the sky. Peter stumbled and fell down onto the ground. He wanted to call for help, but found that he couldn't form the words. Peter closed his eyes, tired from the effort of trying to call for help, and rested.

******

When Nathan found Peter on the roof, his brother was cold to touch, his skin was blue. Nathan instinctively began to panic. This was his baby brother, his whole world. Peter was as white as the snow. Nathan tore off his jacket and tenderly lifted up his brother, wrapping it tight around him. Nathan held his brother close, hugging him tight, hoping that his body warmth would help sustain him.

They stayed huddled together on the roof, amongst the cold and the snow. Time seemed to crawl by. Nathan kept staring at Peter, hoping to see some sign of color and warm return to his cold motionless body. He needed Peter to be ok. Nathan couldn't imagine trying to live a life without his brother. No matter how frustrating he could be, Nathan could help but care more about Peter than he could have imagined possible.

******

The hospital was even more difficult to endure. Nathan was thrown out of the room so the doctors could look at his brother. Nathan looked through the glass, biting his lip and hoping that the doctors would save his baby brother. The doctors seemed to know what they were doing, they layered his brother with blankets and had injected him with something to help warm him up. Nathan paced outside the room, constantly stopping and staring through the window at Peter. He was trying not to think about what would happen if Peter couldn't fight this. He needed to try and focus, Peter would be ok. He had to be.

Finally the doctors seemed to have done what they could do. and they all left Peter's room. Nathan ran up to one of them.

"Is my brother going to be ok?'

The doctor looked at Nathan before answering. "We cant be sure. We have warmed him up, but his hypothermia was quite severe....your brothers going to have to fight to beat this..." The doctor didn't know what else to say. so may cases like this he had seen, most of them ended badly. Yet he looked into this mans eyes and couldn't take away his hope. He clearly loved his brother. Maybe that would be enough..

"Thank you...my brothers a fighter" Nathan hoped that saying the words made them true.

The doctor left him to be and Nathan slowly and apprehensively approached Peter's bedside. He was looking better then before. Peter was still white, but his skin was no longer blue. Nathan sat in a chair next to his bed and held Peters hand in his. It felt slightly warmer than before. He didn't really know what to do. So he sat there and held Peter's hand .

Looking at his brother made his heart break. He was so motionless. Nathan fought back the despair.

"Please Peter..." he whispered in a low voice. "Please fight this...I need you too...your all I have..."

Nathan lowered his head onto Peter's bed as the tears ran down his cheeks.

harpie lady · 12-02-2007, 11:38 AM

thats cool..i havent seen any mistakes..you did well

harpie lady · 12-02-2007, 11:38 AM

so emontional=)

LovelyLene · 12-02-2007, 12:31 PM

Aw... that was beautiful, Robyn...

XXX

coldfire · 12-02-2007, 12:35 PM

*sniff* *sniff* Beautiful

bobbinrob · 12-02-2007, 09:08 PM

aww thanks guys!

12-02-2007, 02:58 AM	#1
bobbinrob Moderator Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 20,489	Peter/Nathan Gen fic I asked my friend Tori to prompt me... she prompted me to write a story where Peter gets Hypothermia and Nathan is with him.... so I did my very best. I have not written Peter/Nathan before so let me know how I did also this is unbeated so forgive my errors and leave me a comment coz I still get scared of posting my stories author: thats be me charcters: Peter/Nathan Gen/Pg fic word count: 660 spoilers: not really any, based on s1 early disclaimer: I sadly own neither Peter () nor Nathan nor Heroes It had started snow, and became really cold . He hadn't intended to stay outside so long. Peter had been standing on the rooftop for hours. He wasn't sure sometimes if all of these things could possibly be real. Peter wondered why he had been chosen for these powers. What did the world expect him to do with them? He wished Nathan had understood why he had become confused and overwhelmed. Peter's hands started to shake. He hadn't even noticed the drop in temperature at first. Peter raised his hand and looked at it, trying to make it stop. The shaking continued, and Peter stumbled forward. He didn't understand what was happening. Suddenly his whole started turning as white and blurry as the snow falling from the sky. Peter stumbled and fell down onto the ground. He wanted to call for help, but found that he couldn't form the words. Peter closed his eyes, tired from the effort of trying to call for help, and rested. **** When Nathan found Peter on the roof, his brother was cold to touch, his skin was blue. Nathan instinctively began to panic. This was his baby brother, his whole world. Peter was as white as the snow. Nathan tore off his jacket and tenderly lifted up his brother, wrapping it tight around him. Nathan held his brother close, hugging him tight, hoping that his body warmth would help sustain him. They stayed huddled together on the roof, amongst the cold and the snow. Time seemed to crawl by. Nathan kept staring at Peter, hoping to see some sign of color and warm return to his cold motionless body. He needed Peter to be ok. Nathan couldn't imagine trying to live a life without his brother. No matter how frustrating he could be, Nathan could help but care more about Peter than he could have imagined possible. **** The hospital was even more difficult to endure. Nathan was thrown out of the room so the doctors could look at his brother. Nathan looked through the glass, biting his lip and hoping that the doctors would save his baby brother. The doctors seemed to know what they were doing, they layered his brother with blankets and had injected him with something to help warm him up. Nathan paced outside the room, constantly stopping and staring through the window at Peter. He was trying not to think about what would happen if Peter couldn't fight this. He needed to try and focus, Peter would be ok. He had to be. Finally the doctors seemed to have done what they could do. and they all left Peter's room. Nathan ran up to one of them. "Is my brother going to be ok?' The doctor looked at Nathan before answering. "We cant be sure. We have warmed him up, but his hypothermia was quite severe....your brothers going to have to fight to beat this..." The doctor didn't know what else to say. so may cases like this he had seen, most of them ended badly. Yet he looked into this mans eyes and couldn't take away his hope. He clearly loved his brother. Maybe that would be enough.. "Thank you...my brothers a fighter" Nathan hoped that saying the words made them true. The doctor left him to be and Nathan slowly and apprehensively approached Peter's bedside. He was looking better then before. Peter was still white, but his skin was no longer blue. Nathan sat in a chair next to his bed and held Peters hand in his. It felt slightly warmer than before. He didn't really know what to do. So he sat there and held Peter's hand . Looking at his brother made his heart break. He was so motionless. Nathan fought back the despair. "Please Peter..." he whispered in a low voice. "Please fight this...I need you too...your all I have..." Nathan lowered his head onto Peter's bed as the tears ran down his cheeks. __________________

12-02-2007, 12:31 PM	#4
LovelyLene Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: The Netherlands Posts: 2,953	Aw... that was beautiful, Robyn... XXX __________________ LovelyLène's Art

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coldfire Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: morocco Posts: 3,617	sniff sniff Beautiful __________________

12-02-2007, 09:08 PM	#6
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12-02-2007, 11:38 AM	#2
harpie lady Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2007 Posts: 1,403	thats cool..i havent seen any mistakes..you did well