Old 10-14-2007, 08:45 AM   #1
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Default His name is Naruto

It's sloppy but ithink it's good it made me cry a lil :C




As Iani rushed towards the demon she felt a pain
in her side warm blood was flowing out of her side where a kunai had struck she collapsed to her knees
"I must save mother and father.

It started as a normal day in Konohagakure
running down the hall of konoha's hospital was a
girl of 15 with yellow and black hair almost running
into a young 16 yr old Kakashi Hatake " Iani where are you going"
he asked his voice a little muffled from the mask he wore
" I have to find my mom she's going to have my little
brother soon!!" she said dashing off in the hall.
Opening every door she finally came to the last door
at the end of the hall lay a woman with raven black hair with
a swollen belly smiling and besides her sat the fourth hokage holding her hand
the site of my mother and father made me smile we sat together for hours thinking of
names and then we decided on one Naruto " i think it's a good name
it's a name strong whirlpool and also a name of your favorite
ingrediant in ramen,dad smiled at the comment i had made.
"So Naruto it is" he said.


I had fallen asleep in the waiting room i heard
people screaming " The demon fox it's attacking the village!" i heard people sceaming i knew only too well
that the Kyuubi No Youkou was a giant nine-tailed fox that had attacked the village time over time. then a great fear rose
in me. " Mother "I ran to her room she wasnt there i grabbed one of the nurses where is Meyame Hareku?!" i yelled she answered terrified " She was escorted with the third, I tried to argue with him that she is nearly ready to have birth" i released her and jumped out the window and ran toward the commotion Why would the third want my mother?" then it hit me a lesson i had learned from my father's sensei Jiraiya
if your father had the chance to seal away the demon fox in himself he would" It springed around in my head "but why would Sarutobi want my mother" then i knew i had heard a argument between my father and Sarutobi "If the fox ever attacks again i will seal it in me!" he yelled to the Third "We cannot let the village be weak if you die Akashi!" I had never heard anyone call my father by his real name usaully the shinobu would adress him Yondaime-sama the third continued" If you ever have the chance to seal the fox you should seal it by using another like the weak anbu girl Katana" my father was outraged by this statement, he was talking about my mother. " I will NOT murder another leaf shinobi just because you fear that the Leaf village will be weak without me!!" i heard no more then that, my mind was flooded with sites , jutsu going off , blood and screaming then i saw him the great king of demons
his tails flying around him in a flurry pass me ran a shinobi with my friend Iruka in his arms "No!! my mother and father it will kill them" i heard him yell tears streaking down his face the a giant smoke cloud appeared '' Gamabunta" I whispered it only meant one thing Sarutobi is going to make father seal the fox using mother. I started running the third spotted me he yelled out an order i could not hear from the distance and then i felt a warm, tingling pain in my side a kunai was sticking out of ther wound i pulled it out What's happening? i thought a misfire maybe but another one hit my shoulder "ahhhhh" i screamed in pain the i saw my mother in my fathers arm's they fell and next to them holding a small bundle was Sarutobi a crying came from the bundle i crawled i felt death coming closer "wait" i grabbed his leg" His name is Naruto" I looked up and saw my father holding my mother tears rolling down his eyes shinobi were trying to calm him down and then poof he dissapeered " goodbye"and then i felt nothing.
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Old 10-14-2007, 10:33 AM   #2
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Old 10-14-2007, 10:36 AM   #3
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thanx it just kinda popped in my head

p.s okay most of the names are correct except

Meyame and Iani those are me and my friends nick name im Iani


Pm if you like ti or have any ideas for a sequal ooooohh!!
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Old 11-05-2007, 09:17 PM   #4
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awesome story! you should write more stories or a sequel!
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Old 11-15-2007, 04:42 PM   #5
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Old 11-17-2007, 07:39 AM   #6
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thanx evrybuddy im makin another 1
so far i have
~ His Name Is Naruto < this 1's out
~ My Name Is Iani Uzamaki < this 1's out
~Forgotton Names and
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