Old 09-25-2007, 07:04 PM   #11
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it was pretty good so wats going on here like r naruto and neji and the other bunch older now
Yep!

Last time:

A new Beginning

A sunny Morning in Konoha.........


Yumi:Myu hurry up!
Myu:Alright,Alright!
Amaya:You shouldn't rush her.She might-
CRASH!!
Amaya:hurt herself.
Yumi:Grrr she's worse than Naruto.
Kakashion't be so hard on her,she's your younger sister.
Yumi:And the only one thankfully.
Sakura came up to them running.
Sakura:Anyone see Sasuke?
All:No.
Amaya:I will go search for him.
FWOOSH!!Then she disappeared(sp?).
Bang!!!
Myu:I'm here!
Yumi:Finally!
Kakashi:The others are at the Hokage's office.
All:Okay.
Yumi:I'll go look for Amaya and take her to the Hokage.
Kakashi:Alright!
They all left.Heading for different paths.
In the Forest..........
Amaya:Sasuke,we have a mission.
Sasuke:Hmph.Fine.
????:What are you doing out in these forests?
Amaya:Hm?
The person they saw was a guy with red hair,with a grey jacket with a red shirt under,also his eyes looked red,and he looked about their age.
Sasuke:It's none of your business(sp?).Who are you?
????:Isn't it nice to introduce yourself first?
Sasuke:*clenched his fists*Don't be so smug.
Amaya:Calm down will you?
Yumi:Sasuke!Amaya!We need to-Huh?Who are you?First my name's Yumi Uchiha!
????:Heh.My name is Raw Hyuga.
Yumi:Eh?You're the kid who became an Onbu at 13.
Raw:Right.Well,see ya.
And he disappeared into thin air.
Amaya:Weird.
Yumi:C'mon we have to go!!
Sauke:Alright already!
5 min later...............
Yumi:You gotta be kidding me!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Kakashi:Nope!
Neji:For once I agree with her.
Naruto:Why do we have to be teamed together,Dattabeyo?!?!?!
Myu:It doesn't seem so bad,nya.
TenTen:You shouldn't overryact(sp?).All it is is a team of Yumi,Neji,Naruto,and Amaya.Nothing wrong.
Sakura:But don't they-
Yumi:You're soch an idiot!
Naruto:Atleast I'm not obsessed with cats!!
Yumi:I'm not obsessed with cats,Sasuke is!!
Sasuke:No I'm not!!!Where the heck did you get that idea?!?!?!
Yumi:I got it from Neji!!!!
Neji:No you d-
Tsunade:SHUT-UP!!!!!!!!!!!!
All 4:..........................................
???:Wow.
Yumi:And what are you doing here?!

Now Continuing:

Tsunade:I called him here.He'll be helping you on your mission.
Raw:Yeah so don't act so surprised.
Yumi,Naruto,Neji,and Sasuke:We don't need any help!!!!!!!!!
Tsunade:On my account you do.
Gai:And plus it'll be an awsome experience!
Yumi:Put up or Shut up.
Kakashi:I have a feeling that this isn't going to be easy.
Naruto:What's the mission any way?!
Tsunade:To find an assassin called Loki.
Naruto:Loki..................Never Heard of Him!
Sakura:Ofcourse you haven't idiot!!*hits him on the head*
Naruto:Owwwwwwww.Sakura-chaannnnnnnn that hurt.
Yumi:Idiot.
Myu:Isn't Naruto funny Onee-chan?(She means Amaya)
Amaya:Weird too.
Shikamara:Meh.He's always been a pain.
Neji:I agree.
Tsunade:Now.GO!
FWOOSH!!And they left.
TBC

Sorry I didn't have that much time to type!Bye!
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Old 09-25-2007, 08:38 PM   #12
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yeah loki ^_^ my character!!!!! good job i thought it was pretty funny
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Old 09-26-2007, 12:30 AM   #13
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it was perfect..both the story and the caracters profile....I enjoy it very much..good work..no splendit work..if you can you should continue...
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Old 09-26-2007, 04:40 AM   #14
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this getting interesting
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Old 09-27-2007, 07:01 PM   #15
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I'll post when i have time cause i gotta do somethin today.
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Old 09-27-2007, 07:48 PM   #16
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one again awsome keep it up
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Old 09-29-2007, 01:35 AM   #17
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Oohh~~

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comtinue continue!!
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Old 10-04-2007, 06:08 AM   #18
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Naruto:Grrrrrrrrrrr.
Sasuke:Idiot.
Yumi:Cut it out.You both are idiots!Annoying ones.
TenTen:Now you know how we feel.
Myu:Yumi,don't argue again!
Amaya:Too late.I wonder what would happen if they didn't meet eachother...
Sakura:Me too.
Raw:You guys need to find a way to get along.
Neji:I have a feeling it's not gonna happen.
Yumi:Why do I have to suffer?Why?
Myu:It isn't so bad.
Raw:Get used to it already,will ya?
Yumi:Ugh.
Kakashi:*talking to Gai*We're getting close.Someone's out there.
Gai:*nods*Right.
Lee:I will complete this mission!
Sasuke:Stop doing that.Guess Naruto's not the only idiot.
Naruto:Ahh shut-up.
Sakura:Hinata why are you so quiet?
Hinata:I..uh..I............uhhhhhh nevermind.
Amaya:You shouldn't be so shy.
Myu:Yeah!We're your friends!*smiles big*
Hinata:.................Alright................
Kakashi:Myu!Watch out!
A kunai was heading straight towards her.
Raw threw a kunai colliding with the other one making it head in another direction.
Raw:Well,who threw that?
????:Me.I threw it.
Amaya:Hm?
Yumi:What the-?
Raw:You must be Loki.
Loki:I see that you're the smart one.
Yumi:That makes me the dumb one.
TBC
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Old 10-04-2007, 09:16 AM   #19
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nice stories like everyone else said i cant wait for another one comes out
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Old 10-04-2007, 05:59 PM   #20
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Awesome storys can't wait to read more. Good job!
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