Old 08-22-2007, 05:09 PM   #1
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Default A life with orochimaru

Ive knoticed that oro is hated and seen as a pedophile by many members so i thought i would write a story with my perception of him so here it is.....

A life with Orochimaru

one day oro and kabuto were strolling through the sound village when kabuto knotices a child on the street crying he points this out to oro. Oro walks over to the child "child what are you doing here?" the child sniffles and looks up at oros face " my parents were killed on the way to this village so i ran here but noone cares". "Oh i see well then would you like to come with me?" kabuto interupts " oro-sama do you really", "yes of coarse, now child come with me." "umm ok" responds the child "excelent" says oro "well then what is you name child?". "its tom oro-san" "well then are you hungry?".
"yes very much so oro-san". "alright then Kabuto get this boy some food and meet us at the castle". "yes orochimaru-sama".

When they arive at the castle tom is given some food whilst kabuto talks to orochimaru in a nearby room, tom hears them and draws his ear close to the door. "But oro-sama why take in this child hes just trash off of the streets". " I took him in because he deserves a home and i will need a replacement for once your old and useless". "oro-sama do you really intent on replacing me with that..." Kabuto goes silent as he realizes where tom is and that he is listening in on them. "orochimaru-san" said tom from behind the door. "yes tom", "is kabuto angry with me". "no child he is just confused now please go finish your meal". "alright oro-san" "oh and im sorry kabuto-nii san that your mad I hope you fell better later".

"He called me his brother" says kabuto quietly." See he considers you and I his family now and its only fitting that we continue to care for this child".

(fast forward 6 years from then, tom is now 11 and has recieved ninja training, he is very talented)

"Tom", "yes nii-san". "Orochimaru would like to see you he has a gift for you" says kabuto.

"orochimaru-sama, kabuto said you wanted to see me" said Tom as he entered the throne room. "I would like to give you a gift Tom for doing so well in your training".

"thank you Oro-sama what is it"asked Tom.

Oro walks up to tom and grins "you want to be with me forever correct?"

"yes orochimaru-sama after all were family."happily says Tom.

"Good then you shall recieve this mark as our eternal bind to eachother" Orochimaru gives Tom the curse mark on the left side of his neck.

Tom screams and falls to the floor "aaahhhhh thank you Orochimaru sama".

Orochimaru has Tom brought to his room until he stabalizes.

The next morning Tom wakes up and walks out of his room and sees kabuto walking down the hall carrying a body. He yells "Nii-san watcha doin?" Kabuto replies "taking out the trash", "but thats a person nii-san is he dead". "no hes just sleeping because of some drugs i gave him, he'll be fine now go and practice your kunai throwing with kimmimaru alright".

"Yes nii-san"replies Tom as he dashes offf in the direction of kimmimarus room.

"kimmimaru-san, kabuto said i should train with...???? wheres kimmimaru" Tom askes a servent that was making the bed.

"I belive orochimaru san gave him a mission but im sure he'll return soon." said the servent as she left the room with the old bedspread.

With noone around to assist with his training Tom goes to orochimarus room "Oro-sama" yells Tom as he entered the room.

"yes Tom"said Orochimaru."When will kimmimaru-san be back from the mission you gave him?"asked Tom

"anytime now" responded orochimaru, Tom groans "then who will train me oro-san?"

"Now that I think of it i do have somthing id like you to do"said Oro. "really what is it a mission?"

"No, but its just as important." Oro hand Tom a bottle filled with medicine. "take this they will make you stronger."

"ok" says tom as he pours the medicine into his mouth. Suddenly he starts screaming in agony, but passes out after a few seconds.

(Im gonna fast forward another another 5 years, Tom is now 16 with a level 2 curse mark)

While on a mission for orochimaru to see one of his clients and run a test on a prototype he passes by naruto, sakura and, Kakashi hom are also on a mission investigating some recent disaperences.

Naruto knotices the curse mark on Toms neck . "hey kid wered you get that mark"screams Naruto.

"I recieved it from orochimaru sama why does that matter to you?"casualy says Tom.

"Do you know where Sasuke is?" Yelled Sakura in a heat of rage.

"Oh Sasuke nii-san ya I know him why do you?"responds Tom calmly.

Naruto charges at Tom rasengan in hand.

Tom grabs narutos arm and breaks it with a loud crack.Then kicks naruto in the chest causing him to fly into a tree and break it in half.

"Seeing by the Rasengan You must be naruto and if im not mistaken your sakura correct?"

sakura throws several kunai at Tom they all miss so she runs at him with her fist clenched ready to strike. Tom jumps into a tree close behind him. Sakura hits the tree full force knocking it down.

"it was nice meeting you and i hope to meet you two again, maybe in a scenario where i have more time to play, but im on a mission so goodbye" *Tom vanishes in a cloud of smoke*

THE END?
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Old 08-22-2007, 05:16 PM   #2
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wow that was cool
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Old 08-22-2007, 05:18 PM   #3
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thank you it took me a half an hour to write and i plan on writing some simaler scenarios.
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Old 08-22-2007, 05:19 PM   #4
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O.o wow...Nice Story..But what was the moral of the story...That Oro was a pevert or was he not..I Still think Oro Is the animated version of MJ lol
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Old 08-22-2007, 05:23 PM   #5
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the point was to prove that he is not a pedophile as you so commonly put it. THe point was to show that orochimaru is caring to all those who follow him take the jonin that joined konohna after she decided not to follow oro. Or kimmimaru who was hated by everyone in his clan and used as a pawn for their battles oro took him in .
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Old 08-22-2007, 05:29 PM   #6
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By what Ive seen of Oro He just uses people..He just uses them as Pawns to get what he wants..
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I suppose still its all a matter of conception people are bound to disagree .
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Old 08-22-2007, 06:04 PM   #8
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Hmm..Proberly..-Saw Oro and Shot Him- God damn You!

Oro: I was only spying on you..
Kiba: hey Dude we do that too
Oro: intresting.
Shino: Teh prettiness!! hehe.
Me: ARGH!!!
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Old 08-22-2007, 06:19 PM   #9
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lol you and your groupies lol. you hugged them in the cafe if i remember correctly , i think oro just needs a hug. : )
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Old 08-22-2007, 07:08 PM   #10
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lol nice story dude. and rekena i think u might be perverted? i mean your the one who keeps making shino peek on you. hwo do u think he feels??
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