Day One

losty09 · 07-24-2006, 03:10 PM

Alyssa broke the surface of the water, fighting for breath. All she could hear were screams all around her. A few feet away, another woman was struggling to stay afloat, coughing and sputtering. Alyssa swam to her, putting her arms beneath the other woman's, pulling her head above the surface. Alyssa forced her way through the masses of people to the beach, fighting the water. Breathing heavily, she lay the woman down on the sand and ran back into the water to help others. She helped pull a child from the shallows onto the beach, and then went back in again.

What a nightmare this had turned out to be. There were bodies floating everywhere. Looking back she could she the sand of the beech growing dark red with blood. She could see a man, probably in his mid thirties, calling out for people to move away from the engine. Debris from the ruined plane flew about everywhere. After pulling a young blonde woman from the water and onto the beach, she collapsed on the sand. Her vision began to dim and she felt herself loosing contiousness. She gave in to her exaustion and knew no more.

((If you want to write something out of character, use double parenthasis. Please no inappropriate scenes, as there will be people of all ages particcipating. Well, that's all there is to it enjoy!))

mattyrewls22 · 07-24-2006, 04:06 PM

Matt woke up and looked around at break neck speed. "Oh... my... god". All he saw were bodys, limbless, floating around, stumped against trees. He couldn't find one person alive, he tried to stammer to his feet, but his legs wouldn't let him, was this an after effect, or just fright.

He shouted "Anyone! anyone please help". It fell upon deaf ears, it seems it was alone now, he wanted to help the wounded, if there were any, but he couldn't. He turned around and grabbed the pertruding rock, he would crawl out of this bamboo thicket, he wasn't going to die, here, not yet.

(He was several miles inland)

07-24-2006, 04:17 PM

Luke slowly opened his eyes and saw a young women hovering over him, she said to a man right next to her, "I think he's awake!", then she turned to Luke and said, "Are you okay?", "my leg hurts", Luke replied. Just then Luke turned his head to see where he was, and right next to him was a man drenched in blood. Luke felt himself losing conscieousness, and then all of a sudden passed out.

Darkhorse · 07-24-2006, 04:23 PM

The excruciating pain in Riz's chizled back and shoulders did not stop him from dragging survivors away from the hot debris and engine.

"Get back! Help me..... gotta get them away!" he yelled. Riz grabbed the arm of a young blonde woman and began to drag her, but lost his footing and fell, pulling her onto him. Her coldness was a reality he did not want to face. He attempted to continue his needless rescue, picking her up off the ground. She was so pretty.

An older man stepped in front of him to assist, then paused as he saw the lifeless woman. His wise eyes moved upward and into Riz's. "I'll take her. You go get that boy."

"NO! Don't touch her!" cried Riz. Surely this was a dream. She was so pretty.

mattyrewls22 · 07-24-2006, 04:26 PM

Matt had crawled many miles now, but not even close to the beach, he though to himself, die here? or get help, dieing wasn't a very enthusiatic result,he wouldn't let go of hope, not yet, the cold, draining reality of what happened had crawled into his mind.

10 minutes past, he saw the beach, adrenalin rushing, he crawled further. SLAM! all went black.

Mtavares · 07-24-2006, 04:30 PM

The scent of warm wet grass woke Mikahil up from his longer-than-planned sleep. The jungle that lay before him was unseen to his eyes, yet he wasn't even suprised, his drinking had led him to stranger places before, including a weird looking club called "The Blue Oyster"... He stood up, trying to recall what happened, and especially wondering why everything was quiet like a church. An airport..., number 815..., seat 42G..., slowly his mind started to remember his need to be at Los Angeles that night. "How the heck did I get in the middle of a jungle? Maybe I'm at the zoo...". Then he noticed the sand beneath his feet and slowly turned his head backwards.

*BOOM* The sound of an engine exploding made his hearing return to him. People screaming, crying, debris flying all over the place. "Oh... my... God...".
Mikahil suddenly woke up to the disaster around him, memories of him ordering the waitress his 5th vodka lemon, that same waitress getting thrown at the roof of the plane, a short weird looking englishman sitting next to him and fastening his seatbelt in a hurry, the feel of the plane falling down rapidly...

"Must have passed out after that..."

He quickly scrutined his body for any injuries, strangely noticing he only had some scrapes in his face and his left arm numb. Quickly he noticed many others didn' ahve as much luck as he did: blood red tainted the beach on front of him and at least a dozen lifeless bodies stood floating in the sea. A woman carrying one of the survivors from the shore collapsed in front of him. "I gotta do SOMETHING to help." Instinctivly, Mikahil leaned towards the passed out woman, grabbing her by her arms and dragged her out the wreckage...

((Excuse any gramatical errors or typos, english isn't my first language, though i really want to be part of this

))

losty09 · 07-24-2006, 05:01 PM

Alyssa was glad Luke waso alright. He was one of the people she had pulled from the water. He had regained consiousness for a short time, and she had talked to him briefly, and pulled him over to rest by the fire. She took a sip of water from a bottle she had found in the wreckage. There wasn't much water, they would have to be careful and make it last untill the rescue came. She pulled her dark brown hair back from her neck.

Beside her, alyssa saw Luke stirr. She handed him the water bottle. "Hey, you alright Luke?" he took a sip and then passed out again.

mattyrewls22 · 07-24-2006, 05:07 PM

Matt opened his eyes, then shut them again. "Still here? god damnit!" he couldn't move, not an inch.. he could bearly shout "Help me! someone", but with all the energy he had left, he did.

Now, all enegery had gone, he was alone, he hoped someone, somewhere had heared him through all the desolete screaming.

Mtavares · 07-24-2006, 05:16 PM

A scream echoed through the jungle: "Help me! Someone!". Mikahil, with his mind still revolving, thinking how he managed to survive, quickly turned around. Bursting with quick steps into the jungle, he foolowed the sound, hoping to find another survivor. There weren't many, about 50 he thought.

Soon he arrived in a clearing where a man laid on the jungle floor, apparently unable to move. "Mate, you alright?" Apparently his name was Matt, and was also on the crash. Unable to carry him out on his own, Mikahil prompted: "Mate, are you sure you can't walk? I can't carry you away from here, I heard there was a doctor on board that survived, maybe I should call him?"

mattyrewls22 · 07-24-2006, 05:19 PM

Matt stumbled heavily to his feet and walked around half like a drunken man, half like a hippo. "Uh.. uh... i think so".

He pulled up his trouser leg and showed Milhaki (spell?) a wound. "Don't mind me if i fall back." He half smiled.

"What a terrible day this turned out to be"

(g2g) (are we having flashbacks?) (also, i have a good idea for a storyline, will reveal tommorow, but it has to happen on DAY 1)

07-24-2006, 03:10 PM	#1
losty09 Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 45	Day One Alyssa broke the surface of the water, fighting for breath. All she could hear were screams all around her. A few feet away, another woman was struggling to stay afloat, coughing and sputtering. Alyssa swam to her, putting her arms beneath the other woman's, pulling her head above the surface. Alyssa forced her way through the masses of people to the beach, fighting the water. Breathing heavily, she lay the woman down on the sand and ran back into the water to help others. She helped pull a child from the shallows onto the beach, and then went back in again. What a nightmare this had turned out to be. There were bodies floating everywhere. Looking back she could she the sand of the beech growing dark red with blood. She could see a man, probably in his mid thirties, calling out for people to move away from the engine. Debris from the ruined plane flew about everywhere. After pulling a young blonde woman from the water and onto the beach, she collapsed on the sand. Her vision began to dim and she felt herself loosing contiousness. She gave in to her exaustion and knew no more. ((If you want to write something out of character, use double parenthasis. Please no inappropriate scenes, as there will be people of all ages particcipating. Well, that's all there is to it enjoy!)) __________________ "You're just not looking at the big picture, Doc. You're still back in civilization. Me? I'm in the wild."

07-24-2006, 04:17 PM	#3
hugos_brother Posts: n/a	Luke Luke slowly opened his eyes and saw a young women hovering over him, she said to a man right next to her, "I think he's awake!", then she turned to Luke and said, "Are you okay?", "my leg hurts", Luke replied. Just then Luke turned his head to see where he was, and right next to him was a man drenched in blood. Luke felt himself losing conscieousness, and then all of a sudden passed out.

07-24-2006, 04:30 PM	#6
Mtavares Member Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 17	Mikahil The scent of warm wet grass woke Mikahil up from his longer-than-planned sleep. The jungle that lay before him was unseen to his eyes, yet he wasn't even suprised, his drinking had led him to stranger places before, including a weird looking club called "The Blue Oyster"... He stood up, trying to recall what happened, and especially wondering why everything was quiet like a church. An airport..., number 815..., seat 42G..., slowly his mind started to remember his need to be at Los Angeles that night. "How the heck did I get in the middle of a jungle? Maybe I'm at the zoo...". Then he noticed the sand beneath his feet and slowly turned his head backwards. BOOM The sound of an engine exploding made his hearing return to him. People screaming, crying, debris flying all over the place. "Oh... my... God...". Mikahil suddenly woke up to the disaster around him, memories of him ordering the waitress his 5th vodka lemon, that same waitress getting thrown at the roof of the plane, a short weird looking englishman sitting next to him and fastening his seatbelt in a hurry, the feel of the plane falling down rapidly... "Must have passed out after that..." He quickly scrutined his body for any injuries, strangely noticing he only had some scrapes in his face and his left arm numb. Quickly he noticed many others didn' ahve as much luck as he did: blood red tainted the beach on front of him and at least a dozen lifeless bodies stood floating in the sea. A woman carrying one of the survivors from the shore collapsed in front of him. "I gotta do SOMETHING to help." Instinctivly, Mikahil leaned towards the passed out woman, grabbing her by her arms and dragged her out the wreckage... ((Excuse any gramatical errors or typos, english isn't my first language, though i really want to be part of this )) __________________ There are 10 types of people: those who understand binary, and those who don´t. I Want a Wristband!!!!!

07-24-2006, 05:01 PM	#7
losty09 Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 45	Alyssa was glad Luke waso alright. He was one of the people she had pulled from the water. He had regained consiousness for a short time, and she had talked to him briefly, and pulled him over to rest by the fire. She took a sip of water from a bottle she had found in the wreckage. There wasn't much water, they would have to be careful and make it last untill the rescue came. She pulled her dark brown hair back from her neck. Beside her, alyssa saw Luke stirr. She handed him the water bottle. "Hey, you alright Luke?" he took a sip and then passed out again. __________________ "You're just not looking at the big picture, Doc. You're still back in civilization. Me? I'm in the wild."

07-24-2006, 05:16 PM	#9
Mtavares Member Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 17	A scream echoed through the jungle: "Help me! Someone!". Mikahil, with his mind still revolving, thinking how he managed to survive, quickly turned around. Bursting with quick steps into the jungle, he foolowed the sound, hoping to find another survivor. There weren't many, about 50 he thought. Soon he arrived in a clearing where a man laid on the jungle floor, apparently unable to move. "Mate, you alright?" Apparently his name was Matt, and was also on the crash. Unable to carry him out on his own, Mikahil prompted: "Mate, are you sure you can't walk? I can't carry you away from here, I heard there was a doctor on board that survived, maybe I should call him?" __________________ There are 10 types of people: those who understand binary, and those who don´t. I Want a Wristband!!!!!

07-24-2006, 04:06 PM	#2
mattyrewls22 Senior Member Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 37	Matt woke up and looked around at break neck speed. "Oh... my... god". All he saw were bodys, limbless, floating around, stumped against trees. He couldn't find one person alive, he tried to stammer to his feet, but his legs wouldn't let him, was this an after effect, or just fright. He shouted "Anyone! anyone please help". It fell upon deaf ears, it seems it was alone now, he wanted to help the wounded, if there were any, but he couldn't. He turned around and grabbed the pertruding rock, he would crawl out of this bamboo thicket, he wasn't going to die, here, not yet. (He was several miles inland)

07-24-2006, 04:23 PM	#4
Darkhorse Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 471	The excruciating pain in Riz's chizled back and shoulders did not stop him from dragging survivors away from the hot debris and engine. "Get back! Help me..... gotta get them away!" he yelled. Riz grabbed the arm of a young blonde woman and began to drag her, but lost his footing and fell, pulling her onto him. Her coldness was a reality he did not want to face. He attempted to continue his needless rescue, picking her up off the ground. She was so pretty. An older man stepped in front of him to assist, then paused as he saw the lifeless woman. His wise eyes moved upward and into Riz's. "I'll take her. You go get that boy." "NO! Don't touch her!" cried Riz. Surely this was a dream. She was so pretty.

07-24-2006, 04:26 PM	#5
mattyrewls22 Senior Member Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 37	Matt had crawled many miles now, but not even close to the beach, he though to himself, die here? or get help, dieing wasn't a very enthusiatic result,he wouldn't let go of hope, not yet, the cold, draining reality of what happened had crawled into his mind. 10 minutes past, he saw the beach, adrenalin rushing, he crawled further. SLAM! all went black.

07-24-2006, 05:07 PM	#8
mattyrewls22 Senior Member Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 37	Matt opened his eyes, then shut them again. "Still here? god damnit!" he couldn't move, not an inch.. he could bearly shout "Help me! someone", but with all the energy he had left, he did. Now, all enegery had gone, he was alone, he hoped someone, somewhere had heared him through all the desolete screaming.

07-24-2006, 05:19 PM	#10
mattyrewls22 Senior Member Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 37	Matt stumbled heavily to his feet and walked around half like a drunken man, half like a hippo. "Uh.. uh... i think so". He pulled up his trouser leg and showed Milhaki (spell?) a wound. "Don't mind me if i fall back." He half smiled. "What a terrible day this turned out to be" (g2g) (are we having flashbacks?) (also, i have a good idea for a storyline, will reveal tommorow, but it has to happen on DAY 1)

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